Monday, November 2, 2009

I'm Moving On...

...at last I can see, life has been patiently waiting for me.

I'm changing my thread to wool and my cloth to lace
I'm changing my doubt to faith and my shade to light
I'm letting my soul dance and choose its song
I'm letting my spirit soar to where it ought

Oh brain, deal kindly with me
give room for the heart to crawl
give room for the heart to fall
give room for the heart to rise
give room for the heart to learn

Im changing from what I was given to what I've found
the gifts were keys, I thought they were gods
and the keys were for sharing, I thought they were mine
but Ive changed the lines to paisley


9 readers said:

Rose said...

...change is good.

blogoratti said...

Liking that those last lines..

FASCHE said...

thx blogoratti

sure, rose

Myne Whitman said...

Lovely poem, I love the middle lines. Well done.

FASCHE said...

thx myne!

HYAW said...

the second to the last verse, that's so sincere. i love your ingenuity.

FASCHE said...

Tanx!

sunnyside said...

beautiful poem.
nice rhyme.
.. keep it up

FASCHE said...

thx sunnyside!

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